Lovely wordplay. I could write an essay on the way you play with rhyme alliteration assonance and consonance.
Words sifted of impurity
Till only the orginal intent is exposed
Meaning gleaming under scrutiny
Beautifully done. So smooth and effortless. I think this is why the poems you just pour out work best. It's the same for me. If I write intentionally on something I never get the same seamless smooth sort of feel to them.
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Lovely wordplay. I could write an essay on the way you play with rhyme alliteration assonance and consonance.
Words sifted
of impurity
Till only the orginal intent
is exposed
Meaning
gleaming under scrutiny
Beautifully done. So smooth and effortless. I think this is why the poems you just pour out work best. It's the same for me. If I write intentionally on something I never get the same seamless smooth sort of feel to them.
Of the three I wrote yesterday, this is my favourite one, it just seemed so seamless as it came out onto the page
I agree, the less I think about the poem, the better it seems to become.
Im in a good place at the moment...
its nice.
thanks Moon *hugs*, you always encourage me, I really appreciate it.
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