a ghostly lover - nice fantasy write. I'm not quite sure whether the 'you' at the end of the poem is the same 'you' as is in the beginning? hmmm I get a little confused by the last two lines.
Well, the you is supposedly the same you, drawing me and my ghosts in, but I will look at reworking if it is confusing :)Ghost lovers are an easy and ongoing theme *grin*
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a ghostly lover - nice fantasy write. I'm not quite sure whether the 'you' at the end of the poem is the same 'you' as is in the beginning? hmmm I get a little confused by the last two lines.
Well, the you is supposedly the same you, drawing me and my ghosts in, but I will look at reworking if it is confusing :)
Ghost lovers are an easy and ongoing theme *grin*
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