Wednesday, May 06, 2009

He held

cinders of the sun

on the tip of his tongue

the taste of light

enticing

2 comments:

burning moon said...

nice. I wrote a line in a poem about a kiss 'filling my mouth with light,' or some such thing, and someone commented it didn't work for them. I was gutted. I thought that idea was the best thing about the whole poem!

Some people have no imagination at all!

I went to see the new Star Trek movie last night. I loved it! Thought it was awesome!

Chris Never said...

how can such a lovely line not work for someone?

He or she is/was obviously a complete idiot,you should have taken no notice kid.

I am not sure I can take yet another Star Trek franchise lol

but it was good huh?

Hmmm, I may have to have a look see then.