Make me
in copper and bronze
The flash of sun
sparking from your skin
blinding and binding.
Intricate
the design of time
The way it carries us
Shifting and sifting through
the boundaries of skies
Pulling us through the eyes
of God
You stand on the foaming breakers
as they come to caress
A smile
of curling waves
And I am merely the late afternoon
falling
on your bare shoulders
warm and familiar
Copper and bronze
we melt
reshape
softly hammered
to delicacy
by the sun
9 comments:
you're back!
And with a stunning poem!
'blinding and binding ... sifting and shifting ... softly hammered' wow ... stunning
Lovely write. I could feel the warmth of the sun just reading this.
Hello Moon *beaming smile*, I am indeed, and what a wonderful mood I am in *grins*.
Hope you have been well?
Hello Sandy *smile*, nice of you to drop by and have read, thankyou.
Indeed ... I can positively feel the 'looney cheerfulness' vibes from here ... lol
how did you get on with that little holiday fantasy of floating in a pool with a big drink?
oh, and how did the credit card hold up? *cheeky grin*
Pool was fabulous, the drinks were exotic,the food was wonderful, although I put on about 5 pounds in a couple of weeks lol, but Im already shedding them as we speak, doesnt take long once ya get back to work.
The credit card burst into flames before my very eyes *laughing*,but thats ok, I think everyone could safely say they had an absolute ball on this one *beaming grin*
Looney indeed, I am sparking energy Moon *bright eyes*, havent felt this amazing in eons, it is fantabulous,stupendous, and several other usus not mentioned lol.
lol, well great! Sounds like you got just what you needed.
I'm taking a very brief day off from study to clean my house before I get back into it. What a pigsty!
I have two new guests as well so I'm very busy.
I'm glad you had a great holiday.
And I am merely the late afternoon
falling
on your bare shoulders
warm and familiar
Ahh, I love that stanza. Very tender. The poem naturally caresses. ^_^ Thank you for sharing it.
Cheers.
Hiya Soulless, thankyou for dropping by for a looksee, glad you enjoyed the poem *smile*
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