I bruised my knuckles
on Melbourne's dourer sky
Heavy tread
we are almost there you said
but the grim pavement
whispers
still a ways to wander
little lost souls
still days to plunder
with a dazzling smile
like the rasp of the nail file
across my skin
The tram lines
carve Collins street in twain
look closely
you can just barely
see the blood stain
a dull crust
on the polished metal railing
Someone asks me for money
but politely
not like France
where they will stab you
given half a chance
Here they beg
with embarrassed eyes
and the dirty hands
shake just a little
as if accepting the money
makes them
less than a beggar
How can one be
less than a beggar?
He spins and curls back into the throng
roaming aimless along Swanston
lost in the myriad
We never arrive
we never even
assumed we would
the blood wells
from my hands
and you kiss them
the copper tart
on your lips
5 comments:
hmm, as always you really know how to capture the feel of the street.
I kind of want the he and we to be more defined .. tangible, if you know what I mean? I want them to have substance. I don't know whether that's possible without destroying the delicate weave of rhyme and story here though. I feel as though I have part of the story, the middle part. Maybe you could write a beginning and an end as separate poems?
hmmmm
Interesting thought, I may have to do a revise on it then, flesh it out a bit more, I will contemplate, thank you for the suggestion mate.
Tangible...lol...I am rarely tangible *grin*
that's so true! I was forgetting your basic self is an enigma
you might have a virus in your mailbox. I got an email from you today with a link to a celebrity diet in it.
I don't imagine you would have sent me that?
Yeap,I've been hacked by the bloody Russians !!!
Yahoo told me I was sending emails from a Russian IP rofl
sorry about that, I am trying to wrest control back again
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