Tuesday, March 24, 2009

We were snow
insubstantial
a reason to
shiver


We were rain
formless sheeting deluge
falling together
for hours


We were sleet
driving at windows sideways
always just short
of solidity




2 comments:

burning moon said...

ooo nice.

falling together for hours ... love that. this is great. a simple, clever little poem

Chris Never said...

well thank you kindly


It just sorta came to me,
like an epiphany, but on a much smaller scale *grin*