Tuesday, November 27, 2007

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We wrote ourselves into a corner


Where our convolutions
were mistaken
for revolution.


The circle diminishes
a shrinking diameter
where theories abound
and ultimately
we will run out of room to manoeuvre.

Corners
curving around us
in no particular formation
and all directions.

Your pen
is a feathered quill
still dripping from
the ink I provided.

Mine
a raw bone
not quite picked clean
the flesh
still clinging tenaciously
to give a hint of colour
in an otherwise
white expanse.

You ask me to write tomorrows mood
the rise and fall of weeping
as it catches our defeat
as
it
draws down on unpaid debts
as it
slides beneath thin skin to
stripped tendons of emotion
naked to the stinging air.

Breathe in
and feel the ache.

5 comments:

burning moon said...

diminishing circles and raw bones! ouch!

bad day at the office dear?

I'm safely back in the land of the long white cloud. Nice and cool over here, and no icky flies trying to creep into your eyes and mouth!
Holiday was fun though. Everything went well with no unexpected eruptions on the family front.
Might even do it again sometime.

Chris Never said...

There are no flies in M !!!!!

Perish the thought

lol

cept for afore mentioned sticky little mouth creepin ones *grin*

Glad you enjoyed, what was your most favourite thing that you did??
*places face in chin and awaits expectantly*

burning moon said...

hmmm, let's see ... the zoo was very good.
I think I mostly emjoyed just wandering the streets and watching the people.
It's interesting how different yet so similar Aussies are from us.
I went to a girl guide Christmas carol thing with my nephew and his daughters. That was fascinating. So different from the way those things are done here.

New Zealand is very cool and green after the bare dryness of Australia. Yet each has their own special beauty.
Very interesting trip. Lots to think about.

Chris Never said...

I think the two places are diverse culterally and geographically,yet the people are similar in many ways.


Did you get a sense of how earnestly they try for the cafe feel?

It is so very Milan don't you know
*grins*

burning moon said...

lol ... mmm ... not reeelly 'Milan' exactly, lol

more sort of 'Turkish bazzar'?

lololol