Change the shape of the day somehow kid, instead of going home tonight after work, take yourself to the beach, be it a grey day or sunny, sit on the shore and eat hot fish and chips while the wind blows you sideways, give your soul some food
oh, what a good idea! That sounds lovely. Although I finish work about 1am tomorrow morning, so it might be a bit cold and dangerous on the beach then, but I take your point. I'll think of something. Maybe I'll drag Zac out to the gardens or the beach for lunch.
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I really wanna find that place today. The walls are closing in on me.
This is very good Chris. An excellent short poem. Very profound, with lots of room to think around the thought expressed.
Make space...
Change the shape of the day somehow kid, instead of going home tonight after work, take yourself to the beach, be it a grey day or sunny, sit on the shore and eat hot fish and chips while the wind blows you sideways, give your soul some food
oh, what a good idea! That sounds lovely. Although I finish work about 1am tomorrow morning, so it might be a bit cold and dangerous on the beach then, but I take your point.
I'll think of something.
Maybe I'll drag Zac out to the gardens or the beach for lunch.
I agree, for a short poem, this packs a lot of punch.
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