A blaze of fire rimmed rain
falls gently to the ground
Small stalks of grass catch light
one beside the next
till a ring of little fire is created.
Wavering rainbow surge
the wind picks up particles
of person and places them
carefully one atop the next
till I am here
ringed in light
in plain sight
To all
For all
From me
Merry Christmas
Take very good care of you and yours
from me and mine
I will be back in the New Year
2 comments:
'in plain sight' ... does this mean you're going to post a photo of yourself? *giggle*
Now see ... you have written 'fire rimmed rain' and how pretty and cool is that! I was told the other day that a poem of mine that spoke of tears kindling an oasis of fire was a 'dangerously mixed metaphor' ..... sigh .... I had though it was such a cool concept ...
*isn't giggle a funny word?
Post a Comment